Paper Workshop

Personally, I believe that I should work on my transitions between my paragraphs more. I feel like I jump around too much in my paper. I should put more into leading up to my story instead of jumping right into it. I think the editor of my essay will agree with my earlier points. They may also give me ideas on how to fix my transitions and inform me if there is enough content to the paper. Some questions I would ask them is if they have any problems with me jumping right into my story, or if I should include more background.