Revised Thesis

Thesis:
The use of recording devices for police will not decrease complaints on the police use of force tactics.


Sub topics:
Different types of recording devices.
Rates of complaints.
Rates of departments who use recording devices VS those who don't.
Different types of complaints on police use of [excessive] force


My claim is important because police officers and sheriff deputies are being shown in a negative light recently due to civilians recording their encounters with the police. However, most of these tapes do not show the entire story to the incident. Many people have stated that police need body mounted cameras to capture the entire story. Will that truly solve the issue at hand? Is there even an issue at hand? You will have to wait to read my very in-depth and captivating argumentative synthesis.

Tward a Policy on Drugs Outline

Narrow Topic:
Talking about the legality of drugs.

Thesis:
Legalizing drugs wont diminish drug problems.

Expectations in intro:
Law enforcement problem
Criminal justice system
What people want from the police and criminal justice system

Subtopics:
Financial burden to the state in order to incarcerate prisoners.
Defining legalization>legalization does not always mean deregulation.
Decriminalization of use of drugs.
Use of free-market
 Linking drug use to crime>harder drugs more crime



Conclusion:

Pulls all the information from the proceeding paragraphs. There is no set solution to a problem with multiple variables. We need to think before we act.